Flashbacks
"When you reach a moment of truth in such a story, you
realize that that literary instant results from a confluence
of a hundred facts and circumstances you've read earlier
in the story. Every iota is a related, orderly part of a whole
that cannot be taken out without damaging the overall structure.
When you read a work that gives you this feeling, you know it
was written by a master of transition." --James V. Smith,
Jr.
Flashbacks are brief scenes of past events that take place
before the main action of the novel. They're used to
explain motivations, character histories, background influences,
or information that cannot be told during the linear sequence
of a story. If a character is an adult when the novel begins,
flashbacks are sometimes necessary to reveal how she or he
evolved. The best flashbacks are small scenes, whole and sensory.
TECHNIQUES: The most effective flashbacks have a catalyst
or device-a song, place, person, a sensory stimulation, an
event that plunges the character into a memory. The key to
writing flashbacks is that they must be integrated into the
plot, while casting light on an issue or character. Make the
transition in and out of the flashback graceful. Use the past
perfect tense (had been) as a doorway to the past, a signal
to readers that you're moving backward in time. Once
it's clear to the reader that you've returned in
time, write in the simple past tense. When you're ready
to rejoin the story, use another doorway or device to slip
into the present again-an unusual word, event, sensory awareness,
object.
EXAMPLE: "One autumn night, five years before,
they had been walking down the street when the leaves were
falling, and they came to a place where there were not trees
and the sidewalk was white with moonlight. They stopped here
and turned toward each other." (The Great Gatsby)
Sometimes you don't need to use the past perfect tense
as a transition.
EXAMPLE: "As she looked deeply into the hypnotist's
light, her memories came tumbling back. The night of Gerald's
disappearance, she arrived home late, too tired to notice
that he was not home before her. Weary from a long day at
the hospital, she slipped into bed without giving much thought
to her husband's absence".
TIPS:
- Remember, no matter how intriguing, flashbacks stop the story,
so use sparingly.
- Make certain that the flashback is somehow related to present
action.
- Avoid using flashbacks. Don't rely on them to fill in
backstory. There are often more effective and artful ways
of revealing information.
- Make certain that the plot, characters and conflict are thoroughly
introduced before introducing a flashback.
- Never insert a flashback in the middle of an emotional or
eventful action.
- Never use flashbacks in climatic scenes.
- Do not use flashback solely to characterize and thus replace
dramatic scenes.
- Be brief. Illustrate the information, then quickly get back
to the story.
©Jessica Page Morrell
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